The following link is to an article I had written for my ezine, Getting It Write! It's a summary of what editors really want to see in query letters.
Brigitte Thompson, author of Bookkeeping Basics For Freelance Writers, runs a super blog entitled Writers In Business. She liked the article and has very kindly published it on her popular site. You can view it here:
Hope you enjoy it!
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